Okay. So I joined up with this site because I wanted to see if I was actually any good at writing. 
Maybe I am, maybe I'm not. 
But I could really do with some feedback. 
The great thing about this site is that I am so obvious in all my writing- that is, my personality, likes, views- that if I show this to anyone I know they will immediately judge me. And I hate that. I believe that it is not our place to judge. So please, this is a judge-free zone. 
So yeah. You must be bored, I know I am.