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MY STORY HIT 1K 
          	TY❤️
          	TO ALL YOU GUYS TO EVERYONE WHO HAS BEEN READING MY BOOK❤️

QueenJoceline

Hello I'm writing a jeronica story and I'd really really like ur advice on it plz .

QueenJoceline

@sanaareads thank you and really you'd make a wallpaper thanks
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sanaareads_

@sanaareads_ oh and one more thing I could make You a Better Wallpaper for the story ( I COULD MAKE IT FOR YOU)
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sanaareads_

@QueenJoceline Ok First I recommend speech quotes (" ")
            
            Because when people read your story they want you to know when someone is speaking when they read 
            
            Second is recommend Space when you write when you have someone speaking separate it from the other words or when you have sentences skip lines
            
            Third I recommend after sentences add puctuation to your sentence
            
            Forth I recommend you Use Making Your Update longer like 859 words at least but if you don't feel Like writting too much Leave them on a Cliff Hanger so they'll come back and read when you update 
            
            Other than that you have a great story line and Great love connection❤️
             
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