@Kairo_Thunderwrath No need, in fact I should thank you for writing it. Not a lot of fics on this site, or any fanfiction site in general if I'm gonna be honest, give me much entertainment. Yours did. I like commenting on stuff that I thoroughly enjoy reading so that the author knows that there *are* people who are enjoying their works, especially the ones with low read numbers. (Not that your book has low read numbers, 9.5 K is a pretty good amount, but I think you deserve more, considering the length of the pages.) Besides, the last thing I want is for someone to abandon their stories because the author thinks no one likes the story at all, and that they're a horrible writer when most of the time, that isn't the case at all. It's always saddening when I find something pretty good, and then I realize that it hasn't been updated since 2009. And you say that your writing is far from good. While I will agree that your writing isn't perfect, I will say with absolute honesty that your writing is still pretty good compared to the stuff I've seen across here, fanficition.net, and AO3. Just keep improving. And if you ever get burned out, just remember that it's okay to take breaks. Don't kill yourself over something you're not even getting paid for. And if a story of your's ever fails, look it over, and improve on it. I hope you enjoy your evening/morning/afternoon. As for me, I'll just be around, waiting to see what you can come up with next.