Hi author, I have read Mehmal and Mehmat before. And speaking from a readers POV, you have made the chapters small and even missed a few details here and there in Mehmal, like chapter 7 or 8 (I don't remember the no., but it's an early chapter. Requesting you to not change any information in Mehmat. Because the book is impactful just the way it is. It is one of my most favourite books that I had re read around 5-7 times. And kindly consider this input, as I am a writer by profession and reader by passion. And I read in lots of genres.
PS can you please post Mehmat again ASAP. I miss that story a lot. I genuinely like the chemistry between Mehmat & Mehrma. Also would have loved a little more deep dive into zameer's story, but the previous plot was also good to go.