AliIbrahimi6

for your on going story .....you can add chapter on .....make Talha and Ayat work on their weak relationship of love  turn into a strong bond of trust and support to protecting each other and their family whenever situation wants them without thinking twice ..... then you can add a new romance flirt Talah as Ayat wanted a life partner. as she deserve and more trusting caring Ayat as Talha wanted in his wife with he innocent and crazy crispy bait back playing with Mohit instead of serious fearing Ayat  ....like Sabeeka or Shariq or new enter who come back or try to create rift or misunderstanding by trying to come between them... but they didn't hide from each other anything and make some rule to work on their friendship and relationship of husband wife more stronger then ever this time or get angry on each other but understand the situation alert each other and help to fight and come out clean and strong this time .... Abid ahead sudden hospital admitting or heart surgery and their supporting helping unconditional bring them more close then before ....when Ayat was near to complete her Engineering add her pregnancy a new beginning of their family and future etc

sara_khan24

@AliIbrahimi6 baby just trust my writing I shall definitely do my besttt....
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AliIbrahimi6

hi,  will you like to write something on this kind of Story pliot
          Talah and ayat got in nikha in childhood which Talha forgot and never remember and his father to forgot to remind him got busy in life business after his wife death…. But ayat remember as her dadi remind her all the time…ayat stay with he dadii after her parents death….but later come to Ahmed house after her dadi’s death..Abid Ahmed his elder son adn younger son and new wedded wife andaleep welcome ayat open heartedly ….but Talha who got propose by sabeeka a friend from undergrads college agree to go on a date …and when abid Ahmed found about Talha geting infested in sabeeka he inform him and put his nikah with ayat in his anger and arrogance of no testing right to select his life partner he stared to say away form ayat and even ignore ayat as much as possible like she never exists for him …but never stop sabeeka from her advance and she assuming that Talha love her as she was only girl as his fired and the way he entrain her ten her to dinner lunch on he request or demand to be a good friend but saber take all wrong and so all other friends too hciha talha realized later seeing ayat distancing from him and unknowingly encourage sabeeka who will cause tto many rouble later in his life and future when ayat found out and saw her introducing herself as Talha’s girlfriend and only love from college days and soon to be fiancé /wife

AliIbrahimi6

hope to see your work on It soon ..thank you
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AliIbrahimi6

16. Got part time job as intern for her expanses not wanted to depend on any one as her self respect didn’t allow her and also got admission in civil engineering and got busy In her life …as she stated avoiding but never take out her pain hurt on Abid or Mohid and as after his Bhi Bhabi’s death Talha had stared seeing Ayat differently and started to like her or say already in love way beyond limit but never realized it …try hard to core them mister or misunderstanding but Sabeeka was always coming in middle and destroying his plan and hard work to make Ayat believe in him that he never was invoke with Sabeeka she was only his friend …but when Ayat pointed all he was doing with Sabeeka he felt shame and accept his mistake which he never realized it before rein his confusion and go busy to get Ayat back by wooing doing his redemption …its up to you increase and add incident how he will woo and got Ayat trust back how much struggle he went through …Ayat ready to give him a chance or not????  .. even if ready to give will it be for herself? or for Mohdia and Abid Ahmed ???? …you can change twice as you like.
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AliIbrahimi6

15. Never told anything to Abid Ahmed started to avoid Talha and try to keep herself busy in study Mohid Abid Ahmed and house work … decided to never depend on anyone and especially never hope anything and got attached herself to Talha as Ayat though Talha had chosen his life partner or life and she had to move on in her life and get ready to even divorce if Talha ever demand but not by herself as she will never wanted to lose and hurt Abid Ahmed and Mohid ….
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AliIbrahimi6

Talh’s Dream losing Ayat:
          
          if possible ....add a part or new story when sabeeka come to him and proves against Ayat complaining about parking lot insolent to throw her way form life na office OR start from Talha reject Ayat in beach breaking her heart trust hope ...START FROM HERE.....make Talha see DREAM losing Ayat and how Ayat's life to destroying in that process plus him getting married with sabeeka and living disastrous life and suffering mohit in the hand of sabeeka and unhappy sad father ... so when he wake up from the dream ..he correct his all mistake and do right thing by wooing Ayat back ....
          thank you

sara_khan24

@AliIbrahimi6 tysm for trusting me 
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AliIbrahimi6

I am ok with whatever you can write ... it will come out wonderful...
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sara_khan24

@AliIbrahimi6 I don’t think I have amazing writing skills, girl. I feel like adding time-travel will make it cringe. But I do love your idea. And yes, I remember  when Sabeeka partnered with him, he also said the same thing: “I’m not a child who keeps holding on to the past.”
            And about the car accident  that was a death, and she was just his ex.
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Nadiyaaa_18

Heyyy girlieee!!!
          Hope you are fine Where have you gone??? and I can't even find your story 

sara_khan24

@Nadiyaaa_18  Aww you noticed my disappearance?  That’s so adorable of you! I didn’t mean to worry you, promise I’m fine Your message honestly melted my heart you’ve got the kindest soul 
            
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Nadiyaaa_18

@Nadiyaaa_18 That's so sweet of you ❤️
            It's okay don't worry I was just worried about you coz you suddenly disappeared and even there was no sign of your story. Glad you are back and you are fine 
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