sarah1

at the moment im just trying to finish 'one forbidden kiss is all it takes'
          	but when im done that then i'll start the sequel!
          	
          	thanks xxx

OMGzombies

Hey I really like yer writing and I was wondering if you could read mines too???? It would mean a lot and I would appresciate it from someone like yourself I know I sound like an ass kisser but seriously...i luv yer writing!!!!!

wendyandpeterpan

hey (: 
          i'm sorry to bother you, but i was wandering if you could read 
          my story Medony? ;D 
          it's not good or anything, thats why i need feedback, (: 
          wellll, if you have time that would be amazing<3 
          but i understand if not <3 
          wellll ; take care (:

BelieveInMe

Hi there! My names Amanda, and i recently uploaded 2 new stories to my profile. One called *Miya*, and the other *Little-Miss-Masquerade*. Miya is more on the older, supernatural side of things, where as Little-Miss is more teenaged drama ;) 
          I was wondering if maybe you would have an interest in reading either of these. I really would like some help with the next chapter of Little-Miss, and i really enjoy and get motivated by comments and votes, especially fans! :D 
          I would really appreciate it if you would read them! 
          Thanks, 
          Amanda

SilverLove

hello, I was wondering when you have the time can you please read a story of mine? Here’s one that I need some criticize on: 
          A New Maid And a Beautiful Bachelor Don’t mix!: romance/humor/ drama
          Evett Castillo finds herself working for one of the most handsome bachelors in England. The only problem though is the fact that he takes pride in making her life a living hell. 
          It would make my day if you could comment on how it is :) 
          Thank you, 
          -Silverlove

DaisanDaDork

Hey, would you mind checking out my stories and give me some constructive criticism?
          
          Here are summaries.
          
          The Angel or the Bad Boy, which one to pick, Heaven or Hell?
          
          -Mayla Kessinger always had thought that she is an ordinary mundane being. But then an some misfortunate event revealed that all her memories and the normalcy of her life are nothing but lies. The two people closest to her, the sweet and innocent Gabriel Morales and the austictic and menacingly beautiful Lucien Cursrotros are not what they seem. Even the famed bad boy of the town, Dante Angliekai has his own secrets. And as secrets and lies start coming out, Mayla realized that the world she lives in is a illusion. Will she be able to discover the truths about her past and decipher the mystery of the so called illusion?
          
          Listen
          
          -Alex Montoya is the new kid in school. On his first day, the Icey Princess, Sharlyene Santiago hit him with a ball on the forehead. He didn't realize it yet, but he fell in love with her right at first sight. But can the Icey Princess warm up to him or freeze him like the hundred others? What Alex doesn't know is that Icey is Hard of Hearing and knows American Sign Language. But she can read lips. The lips that Alex wants so much to have.
          
          I can't say I love you, but I can punch you in the face.
          
          -They met in seventh grade, then Freshman Year, they parted. Now it is Senior Year and Maleah Agapito came back in Adiel Jaypee Tacadena's life. Adiel can still remember the time that Maleah punched him right in the face when he insulted her and tried to kiss her afterwards. Now that she's back, he doesn't like it when her boyfriend that he didn't know about showed up.
          
          Thanks so much! I really would appreciate it!

maryasha

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
          
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
          
          Synopsis:
          
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls
          
          Please read the first two chapters before you decide if you want to continue reading it or not :3