Fatimawriter_528

Hi reader, 
          
          I made a werewolf book, I publish every one chapter on Friday or Saturday or could be both.
          
          I don't know if I did well or not, because it's my first time. 
          
          I kindly ask that you read the 1 to 3 chapters and tell me what you think? I would like to hear anything you say. o(^▽^)o
          
          If you're not interested in it, just say so, I don't want you to feel like you're rude.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/314460899?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=FatimaRose_134&wp_originator=LzvxE7l5%2FmEcxvKFvwN570gYW6Oz3Y52EEsHoGZGoFXBJOKD45gcHt%2BvG8gsZoI95sXobwJ1prwC5fIEe%2B7COQ%2FkIahKSkw2KoMaS9C8CNv3slPMEr5xSFr5kL2Qj4nJ
          

bethany488

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Hello, I started writing a book and I've only just published it if your into mafia romance it would really help for you to take a look! 
          Here's the description! 
          "You'll never get away with this Da Vinci!" I uttered, my lungs burning, my mind full of sinister thoughts.
          
          He tightened the grip of his hand around my throat. It wasn't tight enough so I couldn't breathe but with the grip he has he could do a lot more damage if he wanted to. 
          
          His eyes burn into mine tainting them with every second he leers into my eyes. 
          He lends forward,his head at an angle, as he whispers in my ear.
          
          "I already did and when i'm done with you i'll have you writhing beneath me screaming my fucking name"
          
          :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
          
          Victoria Lawson is a successful 25 year old Detective with her whole life slipping through her fingers after a drug deal gone wrong putting her life at risk throwing her into the undercover position as "Ruby" the bartender and owner of the Scarlet Swing with her bodyguard Raeden a playboy batchelor in the makings. 
          
          One night on their grand reopening guns are fired and bullets fly, separating ruby from Raeden, with the crowds of people running for their lives, landing her into the tight grasp of Mr Da Vinci. The devil with a gun. The man she's tried so hard to conceal herself from since that night. 
          
          What will happen when Da Vinci finds out what actually happened that night or will she escape her seductive captor before he has the chance?...find it all in Open for Business!

Makeitworthwhile

Hello there! 
          
          if you dont want people posting their book, you can delete this post :) thank you for your time reading 
          
          However if you want to read romance books, my friend here wants to improve her writing skills and wanted to share her world through advertizing her book called HER  by wtf11gray If you do not like to read romance you can always visit her poetry: insomniac poetry, mr and ms poetry 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/222590364-her