dazzes

Thanks for the follow :) please check my story "Hidden" out ;) Possibly comment and vote? ;) bunco pen

sarcasmrulz

@Vexuss no problem ;) and i have read hidden and it seems like it could be really good and by the looks of it so do a lot of other people....good luck writing it! i'll definitely read it when more chapter come out :-)
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musicnote15

Ok so ur story u have a good plot. Question that was ur prologue right? But u could do better by like telling who's talking and what not ok...but good so far

sarcasmrulz

i didnt say who was talking because it will all be revealed later in the story when she fully explains her past and thnx for reading and the feedback!!!
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