Hey, my dude, new to the stories just started Hollywood great story.No trying to be a dick or rude or anything but the whole deal with the periods in certain words makes it almost unreadable. Wattpad isn't so puritanical that you need to censor swear words in other words I mean other people write actual full-blown lemons in stories or even lemon one-shot books. Also, I don't mean to feel like I'm piling on, but the grammar isn't the greatest a helpful hint if you've never heard of Grammarly it is a free internet browser download that downloads to your browser's toolbar up to you can just copy and paste chapters in there and it'll fix the issues you just gotta click on them. I hope you have a nice day and I can't wait to see where the story goes next :)
