I read Keep Fighting just now and I really like how you can simply make your characters move in my imagination. Your narration is very thorough with regards to verbs. :) I do agree with what lorby1000 said about proofreading, but since I don't know that much about grammar I think it'd be best if you read it again before clicking 'Publish Now'. I still don't get who Nick is, I guess you need to support his back story in the next chapters so we would know how is he related with Lucy. :) I love the plot. You should keep it up. <3
