@ bangtanxsonyeontan thank you so so so much for the critique and the advice. It was definitely useful and I'm 100% gonna take the advice serious. I'm working hard on the book and getting ideas, so it was a great feeling to get some critique and you eventually gave me more ideas, so thank you for taking your time on reading my book and giving me advice and actually being honest without being brutal :)
I hope you're having a good day, and again thank you and I appreciate your time <33