CRITIQUE REQUEST
You said you don't want to be contacted via PM so I will contact you here.
Anyway, I was wondering if you would like to critique my story. Please let me know if you can. Thanks.
Title: Fugitive Princess Overthrown
Genre: Fantasy
Summary:
The Princess of Ralia is on the journey of her life after her castle was attacked and her family was captured and overthrown. She must now live as a fugitive on the run with the protection of a loyal knight and an unruly servant girl. The three will embark on a long adventure full of danger, conflict, drama and magic as they rekindle old friendships and make new discoveries.
Number of chapters you want critiqued: The first chapter since that is all that is up right now.
Would you like me to be a full time critic?: ....What do you mean by that?
Anything else I should know: Don't be afraid to be honest. You don't need to do a line by line critique, but I would like a good critique.