saturnesque

So I've made a really big mistake on world building, so TJOT is on hold until I can fix that. I might rewrite the last chapter or something as well. I probably won't be able to take it off hold until at least August, but I will start a new work until then.

saturnesque

So I've made a really big mistake on world building, so TJOT is on hold until I can fix that. I might rewrite the last chapter or something as well. I probably won't be able to take it off hold until at least August, but I will start a new work until then.

FugitivePrincess2017

CRITIQUE REQUEST
          
          You said you don't want to be contacted via PM so I will contact you here.
          
          Anyway, I was wondering if you would like to critique my story. Please let me know if you can. Thanks.
          
          
          
          Title: Fugitive Princess Overthrown
          
          Genre: Fantasy
          
          Summary:
          The Princess of Ralia is on the journey of her life after her castle was attacked and her family was captured and overthrown. She must now live as a fugitive on the run with the protection of a loyal knight and an unruly servant girl. The three will embark on a long adventure full of danger, conflict, drama and magic as they rekindle old friendships and make new discoveries.
          
          Number of chapters you want critiqued:  The first chapter since that is all that is up right now. 
          
          Would you like me to be a full time critic?:  ....What do you mean by that? 
          
          Anything else I should know:  Don't be afraid to be honest.  You don't need to do a line by line critique, but I would like a good critique.

saturnesque

@FugitivePrincess2017 I'm sorry for being vague. I'd like it if you contacted me via PM first and then we can talk about this.
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saturnesque

ok but why have a social life when you can have wolfstar fics????