savvala

Thank you all so much for 1K reads! I plan on rewriting YON during July, and in a different manner that will hopefully make the story more interesting and provide more depth for Sophie and James.

hussa086

Hi lovely ❣️ I'm so happy to have come across your story a year of November. It's so beautifully written and every chapter had me in tears. Sophie's character felt so human, something that alot of authors struggle with. It really deserves more recognition. I hope one day it'll be on my bookshelf.

GladysVanessa

I can't remember what loving someone is anymore. But heartbreak feels like your world is stumbling down underneath and as much as you try to hold the walks to your world together they sill tear down, almost into the oblivion. Then the anger and hurt of all that has gone wrong in your life spirals deep in your chest and you wonder whether or not your love was ever good enough for this person. You contemplate for days, weeks, maybe even months were you went wrong. When did everything starts crashing into the pits of hell. Heartbreak is realizing you ave the person a chance to destroy you and they did it anyway.

savvala

This is the most eloquent response I've gotten to the question, and I am actually madly in love with how you described it. Thank you, this is absolutely lovely, in a bittersweet/ melancholy way.
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18sajohnson

@savvala 
          I thought it was very interesting how you brought a new symbolic meaning to the color white. It is usually viewed as a sign of hope or happiness, but you turned it into a sign of monotony, always living by social standards that prevent us from being independent. White IS an empty canvas, and you brought that into broader light then most.

savvala

Thanks! It becomes a major thing for Sophia- one of her biggest peeves.
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