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@Ida-How Oh hi! Thanks for reading my story, I appreciate it! And as for your book, I got my inspiration from a friend who drew a comic of Lukadrien! It was like a sudden want to write a smut for the newest ship. I'm sure your book isn't cringy at all! You probably just need to feel a bit more inspired! The next time you continue writing, go somewhere that you can work easily. Or (this usually works for me) just look at a lot of Lukadrien beforehand. I'm really bad at putting my thoughts into words, so I'm sorry if this ended up like shit, haha. I hope you end up writing a really good story!