samriddhi9

Hey! I don't know if you remember but I randomly texted you among so many when I wrote my first book. You were one of the few who actually tried it and let me know what you thought of it. Thank you for that :D
          
          I am back and I'm writing another story if you want to try it out! 
          
          It has a quirky friend group, next-door neighbours and loud girl x calm guy trope.
          
          It presents a great mix of friends and family - both blood and found. Some sibling fights and friendly teasing are thrown here and there as the main leads make their way through their problems and maybe towards each other as well. Read 'Here To Stay' ato find out!
          
          (and and and... He's the Boy Next Door!)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/306755245-here-to-stay
          
          Thank you for your time and HAPPY READING!

romanceseekerr

i’m sorry i saw a comment of yours and looked at your profile- biatch- i totally love you omg. your taste in music is beautiful, as well as shows/movies ♥️

sbw001

@romanceseekerr my taste in music is super random so I'm suprised anyone listens to more than a handful of those artists
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sbw001

@romanceseekerr aww thanks
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samriddhi9

Hey, I have started to write a high school love story and I would really appreciate it if I could get some thoughts on it. It is about two people who didn't think they needed something else in their lives until they met.
           If you are interested, go check out 'Hours After Sundown'. I understand if you don't too :D 
          https://my.w.tt/McpDTUYGxbb
          Have a nice day!!

samriddhi9

@SamW001 That was really helpful and I'll try to fill up the gaps between the scenes and improve the flow of how it's going. Thank you again, I'll work on this :D
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sbw001

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@samriddhi9 No not at all. I've actually read about half of what you have and it's good. I'm a pretty blunt, up front, no shit person so I'm being completely honest. I love the concept, and the plot and I think it could be a great book. My only thing is that it seems like it's moving too fast. It's like you're going from point to point, scene to scene with little detail to fill up said scenes. I love the characters, but with how the conversations are going, really fast and to the point, it's hard to keep up. I just think the book needs to flow a bit more instead of just going point to point. I'm not sure if this is what you wanted from me, but I just thought I'd give my opinion and you can use how ever you would like. But overall I really like the book and I'll definitely keep up with it as you update.
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samriddhi9

@SamW001 Hey. Firstly, thank you. Secondly, sorry about the whole messaging random people deal, makes me feel like a weirdo at times lol. Anyway, I hope you enjoy the story and have a great day ahead! :D
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