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‼️NEW PHASE ALERT‼️

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BEFORE I BEGIN: the characters used in my first book are ocs I’ve had (and still are) in development for TIME  and I’ve been thinking back to said book and realized that I absolutely despise it (that was an exaggeration lol, but I’m not proud of it). I’m genuinely amazed it has 12k+ reads  (thx for that btw ).
          
          Now, with all that being said + despite me having another book in works rn, do y’all think I should go back and rewrite it? Cus I’ve been wanting to for a while now, however if I do, there’s a 99.9% chance I won’t publish the remastered version.
          
          There’s many reasons as to why I want to fix it. #1: the writing is Very Bad. #2: several plot issues + everything happens so fast. And #3: historical inaccuracies.
          
          So yea that’s that 

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UPDATE: despite said book now having 17k views, 400+ votes, and 82 comments, I’ve decided to unpublish it. Not only for the aforementioned reasons, but also due to many things in the original not aligning with my Christian faith. The remaster will have a new name + cover, and will be mostly the same in terms of themes/plot points. It’ll be less vulgar/explicit (for lack of a better word). And since I’ve actually had time to develop these characters + story + world, I’m hoping the plot will be less clunky.
            
            Finally, I’d like to thank everyone who has read and supported this book. Even though it’s my first complete AND published work, that doesn’t mean it’s entirely good. I don’t expect the remaster to be perfect, but I do hope it’s way better ‼️
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sc00pityp00pity

At the end of my one book, I thought of writing a sequel about Jen, but then I remembered I have other characters for me to develop, the main one being Trevor's little brother Baiste. (would also like to preface this by saying this universe + these characters has been in the works for a long time [that's important] also I've been bored out of my mind since I finished the other one). I have way more ideas for him that I low-key wanna flesh out more, but before I start putting out chapters and embarrassing myself like with this first book, I'd like to hear second opinions innit
          
          so yea that's all lolz

clownprinxe

AW I CAMT BELIEVE YOU FOLLOWED ME ON HERE TOO  I LOVE YPU

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mines y-plisetskyy
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sc00pityp00pity

@hhermesss damn  what's your snapchat then :0 mine is garcie_garce
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clownprinxe

I don't have one  other than Tumblr I've got snapchat tho lol
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Awalker106

Thanks for voting my story. What do you think of it so far?

Awalker106

Yeah, I'll have to continue it on my other account AngelTachibana90.  Due to something with wattpad.
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sc00pityp00pity

@Awalker106 I find it really interesting and creative + it deserves loads more attention :D
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