i know you can’t respond back to me so just take some notes.
NUMBER ONE:
it took me time for audiences to acknowledge my story too so keep waiting! i’ll promote your story for you.
to catch the audience’s attention, make your story appear ‘aesthetic’ by using fonts and stuff. write a quote that could catch reader’s eyes and also find a really nice photo for the story.
NUMBER TWO:
the paragraphs. i make really short paragraphs as my writing story is really simple and fast. maybe loosen up with paragraphs? conjoining them can sometimes make it difficult to read.
NUMBER THREE:
sugawara and the main character need to have chemistry. make them go on dates. you can make them click. or to make it realistic, make it awkward and then once sugawara or the reader says they’re interested in something that they both like and they start talking about it fervently.
NUMBER FOUR:
the other characters exist too. make them comedic and funny and in the background as well as suga and the mc