Scarletthread

Need your advice. The first chapter is different to most of the other chapters. It doesn’t show any of the tension or drama that comes up later in the book. Does this first chapter need to be switched with the second one? I don’t want to lose the chapter all together. 
          I want people to start reading and want to keep reading, knowing what the rest of the story will be like. 
          Please comment, i really want advice on this.

Hey, I just realised when I write on my iPhone and on my iPad, they don't sync so some parts are a little different! Sorry, I'm working on this 

Let me know what you think so far. (Honestly)

Also please press the like button (a heart) I think. On each page, not just the start of the story:)
          
          If anyone knows how I can get more people reading, let me know. 

I have added more to the story, please read and enjoy. the last chapter needs work but I wanted to put it up to start with. Thankyou please comment (and be honest)

Would love you all to comment. First time I’ve written anything like this. Please tell me if you like it, or if you do t. Any suggestions or tips more than welcome