staren-san

Holy crap you're alive! I wanted to ask you a favor to let me use your characters April and May From your book into one of mine The Granddaughter of Love but you haven't really been active for the pass several years. Just want to let you know that I really enjoy your writing and I want you to go check out the first chapter of my book to see if I did a OK job at portraying your characters. Thanks (^__^)

staren-san

@scarypumpkinWD wow thanks. I tried prof read it so many times and i cant believe I let that character mixed passed me. I tried to leave important plot points like the baby because i wanted people to go read it themselves and not spoiling your story. 
            
            Yes I'm will probably use couple from my favorite books here on WP in almost every chapter. Anyway thank you for enjoy my book and I'm looking forward to your other writings ( ^ω^)
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scarypumpkinWD

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@staren-san  I just read everything. Really cool idea, using other characters in your story. I laughed when Clair told April 'to fucking grow a pair' and, at more points actually. (Like the filmsy wing Cupid thing) :3
            
            One thing though. Somewhere at the end of Clair's angry outburst you mix up the characters.  You talk about May having circles under her eyes and Clair addresses the girl she is talking to as 'May' now. 
            
            I think you caught them both pretty well. 
            So, credits and a happy ghost smiley to you for that!  ~(*w*)~
            
            Maybe I'll pick the story back up again sometime. Though I'm not sure what to do with the sudden appearance of that baby I somehow came up with at the end of that last chapter. X3
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