RajaMohan07

Hi, honestly I dont like the structure of your story (My roometes is sex addicted) I cant find where was the narration and the conversation, I'm proud BS reader at hindi ako sanay sa novel na script conversation.
          
          Pero hindi mo ako basher. 
          
          I love your story, marami kasing BS story na puro BS lang kaya nakakawalang gana basahin, but yours has a story and I love it, 
          
          IM WAITING FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE 
          
          KEEP MOTIVATED AUTHOR!!!!