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@automotivatorlove awww, yay!! thank you so much first fan :D And high five for love of cheese! It's all about the romcoms :3

nihcelpud

Here is my critique for The Other Woman. Your writing is great and you use an effective amount of similes. The vocabulary is good, but you could use higher level words since this is a higher level book. The plot and the theme are strong and interesting. Overall, you are on the right track. Good luck!