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Ok, I felt like the story was weakening towards the newer chapters, so before I post chapter twelve, I'm just going to go through the previous chapters and change some minor issues. Such as grammar, missing details, and strengthening the story with character dialogue, as well as better descriptions. I don't like reading poorly written stories that had potential to be so much more, and I don't want to give ya'all some half ass shit. So just bear with me.