
emilita
Hi there!! Thanks for marathon reading the unsound theory and the truth hunters! I'm excited to have you join me on Yalenas journey! Hope you are enjoying it!

emilita
@seborx Haha, no worries!! Thanks for your feedback, I'm always looking for ways to improve. Thanks for following me, too.
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seborx
@emilita absolutely. Its a stellar series, and you should be proud of the excellent books you have written. I wait with baited breath for book 3. A tip if i may be so bold. Try to expand past "chortle" & "giggle" some. Its better than just yousing laugh repeatedly. But using a plethora of words can help the story be get images better. Thats something i look for in good books. Do they paint a picture with out flooding to much detail. But like i said. Excellent series so far and i am excited for book 3.
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