Starshiner♡

And can you give me a bit help with the next chapter

@lightskys  thanks for you opinion i dont think your rude

Welcome, also I read your book it's good but could use a little work (I hope you don't think I'm rude for saying that I mean it in the nicest way possible) you ever think of having friends read it and adding to it or maybe having like an editor? I think it could become a really good story (not that it's not already good)