I just now saw this comment! Don't give up. Never surrender! Just keep writing. When I wrote that story I was writing for myself just to entertain me and make me happy. You need to write to make YOU happy! I appreciate that you liked my story but trust me it is far from perfect! I am going to go back and edit one day and add some more substance to it but for right now I'm working on a few other stories. Never stop writing! If you enjoy it then do it. =]