Please read my new One Direction fanfiction! If you comment, I'll read yours and comment. :]
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I'm starting a fanfiction that I really want feedback on! So if you have one or two chapters of a story that you would like me to look at, I'd appreciate it if you'd look at the first two chapters of my new story What Happens in Disney [One Direction Fan Fiction].
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1824710-what-happens-in-disney-one-direction-fan-fiction http://www.wattpad.com/story/1824710-what-happens-in-disney-one-direction-fan-fiction
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"'Lock down.' Immediately, there were hundreds of feet I saw scurrying towards the exit. Lock down? I wondered. Why would there be a lock down? Within minutes there was not a sound coming out from underneath the doors or anywhere, and like a stubborn girl I stayed put under the desk, disregarding any consequences I would have to face if I were found. Eventually, I shifted my legs and pulled myself out from underneath the desk. I stood up and made my way towards the door that led into the cafe. When I opened it, everyone was gone. Food was splattered everywhere and chairs were pushed around all across the restaurant. It needed some major cleaning. So this is what a lock down is? And I'm living through it to tell the tale." Many mistake Delaware Porter as being innocent and fragile, but sooner than later she'll prove them wrong when she has to not only survive, but at the same time, protect the famous boy band from revengeful killers on the hunt for her. And she thought it was just another in Disney World.
