Bookreaderlover95
I love Obesseion! I'm confused about how Lily was taken towards the end of the first chapter. How is it possible for someone to injected a needle into someone's neck when that person is already being carried over their shoulder? How can Lily be injected with a needle if she was already over someone's shoulder? Wouldn't it make more sense if whoever taken Lily would have injected the needle into her neck first before they toss her over their shoulder?
secretspysub
I wouldn’t think too hard about it love, I only write because it’s fun so sometimes things don’t really add up, my mommy said she’s going to help me with a few chapters this time around so maybe I’ll ask her to fix that part.
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