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U good?

I’m considering rewriting The Stolen with some small but significant changes that would better the flow and pacing of the story as well as the development between characters and just characters on their own as a whole. I believe the first story would benefit from being written from more than just Darkpaw’s perspective but I’m uncertain. If you have read and enjoy The Stolen is there any advice or critiques you may have? Things you liked and disliked within my writing? Please let me know your opinions!

I absolutely love The Stolen it is so realistic and deep oh my god-
          
          Course, I just only figured out Whisperstar is the ebony she-cat from the prologue lol...
          
          Darkpaw is my heart and is not a Mary Sue which is amazing. I love the twist where she joins but turns against instead of not joining and planning against altogether.
          
          I love your work, keep it up!
          
          :) - Inkpaw

Are you working on any of your books, currently?

Finished reading Darkest Night and it went hard. Violetshine is a bit annoying but she’s well rounded and Twigpaw has and always will be my baby; I’m so happy she went back to ThunderClan and her and Finpaw are cute. That moment when Needletail’s ghost saw Alderheart and she said “did you miss me?” made me tear up. I love Needletail and Alderheart so much. There were a few typos which is quirky for a published book, Hawkwing was once referred to as Hawking and in another chapter Twigpaw was called Violetpaw as well as Macgyver being referred to as a she-cat once when in the allegiances and all other times he’s referred to and described as a tom but all is well otherwise lol

everyone chats shit about the last three books in A Vision of Shadows but tbh Darkest Night kinda slaps, I’m halfway through and I’m loving how much character growth is going on. Violetpaw and her coping with her grief about Needletail, Twigpaw struggling to find her place among the clans, Alderheart being constantly swept aside and talked over by Leafpool and Jayfeather. I’m really enjoying it a lot and SkyClan is touching my heart a bit, kinda developing a soft spot for them

Hey guys! My art account on Instagram is called @/mothclaw so you should all check that out if you like what you see in my banner and my pfp! Especially since there might be some art of some characters from The Stolen making an appearance over there ;)

OKOKOK ALL YOUR STORIES ARE AMAZING HOW DO YOU DO IT I SWEAR AAH-

Do you draw all your covers? Their amazing!!

updated my profiles bg so that you can see the troublemaking trio from The Stolen! from left to right is Adderheart, Roanstorm and Darkriver, sporting the sick star Whisperstar gave her! Roanstorm’s face is covered by my pfp but that’s alright, he’s shy anyways