semiseriousclown

Hey! I don't know if anyone cares enough to look at this but I've got some good/bad/idefk news!!! I realized that I'm a horrible writer but that aside, I have up to chapter twelve written though none are fully edited yet. I noticed that not every chapter has a specific reason to be there which I've learned is highly unprofessional because every word has to have reason to be written and must impact the story even if its a small amount but guess what! I'm not professional whatsoever, I'm a 15-year-old kid who couldn't care less about if my story is good or not! (That's a lie, my mistakes, typos and lack of planning eat away at me day by day in an endless cycle of pain and misery) BUT THAT ASIDE WHO REALLY CARES HAHAHA... Moving on, up until the rewrite of kept all the chapters were improv which isn't something I'm proud to admit. 
          	
          	Also, I am still trying to figure out exactly how I want to release the coming chapters I have built up in my doc. Not sure if I want to release them all at once or release maybe once a week, who knows. Another thing- remember Relapse? Yeah, that one story that I quit writing so I could rewrite Kept? Mhm. Well, I don't know if I want to merge that story in with Kept because it is the same characters, I also decided to shorten the time gap between the two and fix up the whole plot of Relapse a bit, I felt that the circumstances of the "meeting" were very stupid also since I changed Wesley's job in the rewrite it wouldn't really make sense, I'm also changing the relationship between Josh and Wes to make more sense and be more realistic. 
          	
          	I'm not sure anyone actually took time to read this but if you did, thanks! I kinda just needed to put my thoughts into text so I can look back on it later. With all that said, thank you for reading and I hope you are doing well, (or as well as you can be during this pandemic) and feel free to give me any feedback or ask questions if wanted. :) 
          	
          	Until next time! <3

semiseriousclown

Hey! I don't know if anyone cares enough to look at this but I've got some good/bad/idefk news!!! I realized that I'm a horrible writer but that aside, I have up to chapter twelve written though none are fully edited yet. I noticed that not every chapter has a specific reason to be there which I've learned is highly unprofessional because every word has to have reason to be written and must impact the story even if its a small amount but guess what! I'm not professional whatsoever, I'm a 15-year-old kid who couldn't care less about if my story is good or not! (That's a lie, my mistakes, typos and lack of planning eat away at me day by day in an endless cycle of pain and misery) BUT THAT ASIDE WHO REALLY CARES HAHAHA... Moving on, up until the rewrite of kept all the chapters were improv which isn't something I'm proud to admit. 
          
          Also, I am still trying to figure out exactly how I want to release the coming chapters I have built up in my doc. Not sure if I want to release them all at once or release maybe once a week, who knows. Another thing- remember Relapse? Yeah, that one story that I quit writing so I could rewrite Kept? Mhm. Well, I don't know if I want to merge that story in with Kept because it is the same characters, I also decided to shorten the time gap between the two and fix up the whole plot of Relapse a bit, I felt that the circumstances of the "meeting" were very stupid also since I changed Wesley's job in the rewrite it wouldn't really make sense, I'm also changing the relationship between Josh and Wes to make more sense and be more realistic. 
          
          I'm not sure anyone actually took time to read this but if you did, thanks! I kinda just needed to put my thoughts into text so I can look back on it later. With all that said, thank you for reading and I hope you are doing well, (or as well as you can be during this pandemic) and feel free to give me any feedback or ask questions if wanted. :) 
          
          Until next time! <3

semiseriousclown

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I'm trying to fix things. There are a couple of reasons why I decided to completely rewrite Kept. Heres a list. ;)
          1. The lack of quality.
          2. Lack of planning.
          3. How short the story was.
          4. How fast things went.
          5. Wesley ran away for literally no fucking reason. (Besides the fact that he was literally kidnapped and got bored of being with an [occasionally] abusive dick like Sebastian [But like he wasn't even that bad] so whatever...)

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Also only I can talk shit about my characters. ;)
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