semjknapp

I had another weird dream it was kinda cool and different. For those of you who follow me cause of my dreams for ideas for books. Those of you that dont know I dream movies some are cool, dumb, morbid, or just plain weird. I can't write so leave it up to everyone else. I have not written about one in a long time but here is the jist of this one. It was vampires that turn into cats so they can get closer to kids and innocents. Ok so the dream was cooler than that sounded lol.

semjknapp

I had another weird dream it was kinda cool and different. For those of you who follow me cause of my dreams for ideas for books. Those of you that dont know I dream movies some are cool, dumb, morbid, or just plain weird. I can't write so leave it up to everyone else. I have not written about one in a long time but here is the jist of this one. It was vampires that turn into cats so they can get closer to kids and innocents. Ok so the dream was cooler than that sounded lol.

CloudZephyr

Hello there! I noticed you added my book 'You, Me & Zombies' to Okish or Did Not Like reading list. I completely understand since my writing was a little weak at the moment and was a little new to writing books related to action. Anyway, I've got a new book called Steal Like Thieves out which is slightly better than YMZ, I think.  Thank you for reading my book though!

Perry_Matlin13

Hey there! I’ve been looking for some constructive criticism, and noticed that you added my story “When Hell Freezes over” to “okish or did not like” I was wondering what you didn’t like about the book. I’m planning a book 2, and could really use some feedback of what worked and what didn’t work. 
          Thanks,

Perry_Matlin13

Thank you! I actually have up to boom 4 planned. I’m actually writing the beginning of book 2 now. Thank you so much for the advice, and I hope you like book 2! 
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semjknapp

@Perry_Matlin13 Hello the book was ok. I had trouble following and wa confused trying to figure out if characters were male or female. It was weird for me because I have not had that happen more than a couple times. I did not like how the story just stopped. You may want to add an author's note saying that there may be a sequel. I was disappointed that there was no real ending and did not see a sequel started on your page. It makes sence now because you are thinking about writing more bit let us know please.
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SEViolet

Hi Shashawn! So sorry to hear you deal with chronic pain, but delighted you have found an avenue that offers a little relief. I wanted to thank you for reading The Savage and adding it to your reading list, it means so much that you enjoyed it! 
          Best wishes,
          ~ Sara