senoritaex

Hiiii...well I am new writer...it's my first story.....so it's may be not perfect but I love it your feedback....and please check out my book...

itsbitswrittenpiece

Hey... I apologize for disturbing but;
          
          There's a story I'm in search of and by time pass, i still failed to find it. I forgot the name and tried ither mutliple ways tomfind it... at last, however, i need your help to find it too. It would be very appreciative and helpful ☺. 
          
          Description: 
          
          Its about a little girl in her toodler age, who has a vampire family- one brother, parents. They have their identity scret from the girl as shes human, as well as from their own kingdom and other species livings too for having a human daughter. They live in some kind of wooden made house far away from vampire world. They use vampire speed power to reach their kingdom. The vampire kingdom is divided into two troupe, if im not wrong thenname of secind troupe is "Darksilver" something. Their head's son knows that that family has a human daughter. He wants to hunt her and keep her as a blood bag just like the rest of the humans had been. 
          
          For easiness, (if it helps)
          
          There's a part where the parents had to leave the house to get blood from their kingdom and asked their son to look after her. The son locked himself in his room trying not to hurt her sister, cause he had blood thirst and his sister blood was easily traced amd near to be drank. At the same time the sister wanted sandwhich made by him, makes a drama in living room using scream as a weapon to catch his brother attention. The brother came hurriedly and worriedly but got irritated once found out the truth and being caught in the act. The girl helps him in kitchen but get her finger cut by the blade. The blood smell spreads widely and in quick moevemmets, the brother makes her sandwich and goes back to his room, pinching his nose avpid smelling the beautiful blood scent.

itsbitswrittenpiece

@itsbitswrittenpiece The writer of this book did a great job at describing perfect decription about each amd every character outwear, appearence etc, for the readers to imagine easily, whenever new character are about to introduced. 
            
            In following part, that same dude (Son of the second troupe) attacks the house. The parents protects their children and order their son to take his sister aways from here, far away and never look back. The little girl doesnt know anything about this, i think when she asked the brother said their playing hide n seem or some games. The brother takes his littke sister away, but got attacked in the midst forest...
            
            Character name:
            Girls mother; Alice
            
            Thats all i know hehe...
            Im sorry i have read this book starting quite 2 years ago and now i cant find it...
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Georgesales01

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Georgesales01

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