@senpaiistired
Wtf was that last chapter in temptation???? I read it but didn't understand ein einziges Wort
It was an April Fools chapter. It is absolutely NOT a part of the storyline, just a small little cringe joke representing the OG Y/n
Hii
I really like your books
If you have time please read my books And tell your opinion.
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Hey!
I read your chapter and I have a few things to say:
1- you should work on your grammar. The chapter is very messy and lacks any sense without punctuation or spelling. The brackets for the dialogues are missing which makes it difficult to understand if there’s a conversation ongoing or it’s a thought.
2- the ambiance is indefinite and it leaves the reader confused. The description of the surroundings is scares and imprecise.
3- the characters are just thrown into the mix without a real introduction, and there’s a lot of room for character improvement.
4- the chapter is short and uninteresting, confusing and messy.
I suggest you write your chapters on a different notes app and review it a few times. Correct misspellings, punctuation errors and just mistakes in general that you might have not noticed before.
If English isn’t your first language, you can use Google Translate or Reverso to write your chapter in your native tongue and have it be automatically translated correctly by the translator.
Hope it helped!
Thank you so much
-Senpai
I know some of you are still waiting for me to finish up the Guren x reader story but I don’t think I will. I’ve published a new story, very different from the first one. It’s a Simon Riley x reader fanfic. I think I’ll be updating this new one much more frequently as it’s something I’ve thought on about for some time.
The schedule should be of one chapter every 2 days of the week:
- Monday
- Friday
These should be the days I upload. The time of the updates might vary depending on how my day went but I can promise you guys I’ll be more productive ♀️
Love you
Ciao ciao
My upload schedule is shit, I basically upload when I get the inspiration to continue on with the story and since I’m a student still I need to make time for school and friends too. I’ll list here some days in which you could expect an upload.
Schedule:
Friday
Saturday
Wednesday
As for when specifically during these days I’ll upload- I don’t know. It could be at 2 am it could be at 5:30 pm. It really depends on how I feel and if I feel like writing.
Hope you be patient with me.
Ciao ciao