@seonamsughos Heya! I saw your message on Jia7Rai's message board and I just came here because it seemed like an interesting book. I've finished the first chapter, and the only thing I'm doubtful about is the punctuations. I have a tip I use myself, write out your chapters in Word before copy-pasting it into Wattpad. It improves your grammar, and tells you when something isn't in correct English. I mean absolutely no offense to you, or anybody else, I loved your chapter and I've voted on it <3