mastaani7892
i ama new write would love to hear your advice and criticisms to my work.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/372609337-ephemeral
seraphiainara
@mastaani7892 Hey! You're doing amazing! Grammar check, spelling mistakes, and sentence formation should be top-notch. To add a little bit of spice, try using emotional language such as exclamation, fear, excitement, etc. Your work is great! Keep going!