Hi girl!!! :-)
Your story it's very cool
but i have a little little note about your story,in my opinion i see your story it will be more bettre and wonderfull if only you make it more longer,
i mine you start the story by Daina marriade Harry and after ajust few time they'll be nice with each other,but that's all changes.........
that all happen so fast,you was should let the story take a more time than that.
And pls,don't think i don't like it,that it's not truth honey:-),
yours it's very very very very nice,and i wait from you the best of the better hhhhhhhhhhhhh......
i know you are good writer , T C. ^_^
<3 <3
HANA