sesquipedalian

care to read mine as well? :D
          http://www.wattpad.com/3121595-you-are-finished-mr-player-prologue

hey would u mind critiquing this story for me
          http://www.wattpad.com/1597769-the-creature-world
          or any of my other stories, thx

@BookLover1994 I left you some detailed feedback and I'm looking forward to receiving your feedback on my story as well. 

@BookLover1994 Sure, no problem. I'd just appreciate if you would do the same!
          

@ParanormalGeek I just did :)

@CJ_Apathy Thanks so much! Haha, how sad that I'm  a newbie. 

Okay, now it's perfect. Many thanks again!

ok I fixed it :)
          
          http://www.flickr.com/photos/63581720@N07/5805748723/sizes/l/in/photostream/
          
          thanks for picking mine! you are awesome :D