setris

Hi, I have recently started writing a book about the reader being Rachel and getting together with Zack (the reader is aged up and Zack is aged down slightly) I would really appreciate if someone would read it and give me ANY feedback as I would love to try and improve. It currently has 5 chapters published and 20+ in drafts which I will post every week, I am working on new chapters every day. This is my first fan fiction, please be kind