UnravelAsha
hi! seeing you pop up in my notifs made me super happy :) what have you been upto?
UnravelAsha
@sevendarkends Omg punctuation? I do struggle with commas alright... I REMEMBER EXTREME! THE ZOMBIES AND STUFF! Honestly, the cover is clear as day in my head even now hehe. But- at least you finished! That's BIG! I guess we need to keep moving forward. It's sad you took it down but I can understand! Recently reread the oldest story on here I ever wrote (Something fate alter time I don't know what the hell I was doing with the title), and I was like damn... what is this and why did I write it? Reading Moon of Yest against Humane might be an experience... I should try it out. Hehehe thank you thank you! Editing is massively increasing the word count too. I think it would be a 200 page book now, which is pretty neat. Thank you <33 I'm good now. Exams ended on Saturday, I'm planning to go watch Zootopia 2 on the coming Sunday, and I did talk to my dad but it's not all smooth yet... it's alright. Oh I see! Do you need to start working soon? But that's okay. Do you have any ideas or genres in mind you wanna write about? We can talk about it to help writing original stuff get easier! Glad to know about her. You and your sister can be a writer-illustrator pair, which sounds so cool! I agree on the cover thing lol, that's the minimum skill I need and rest will be okay~ I'm happy w my cover for now! And thank you for reading :)
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sevendarkends
@UnravelAsha I'll happily beta read, if you're looking for fresh eyes :) I'm really nitpicky with punctuation, so that'd be the first thing I'll be keeping a dead eye on! I'll talk to you on discord so I can see the cover too :) The ONC was my best decision as well! I ended up finishing and shortlisting too :) Remember a book called Extreme? That was my second finished book. I've finished three in my entire lifetime. I ended up rereading Extreme and was EXTREMELY not proud of it...I ended up taking it down in embarrassment *cries* I'm happy you finished a second book, which will hopefully be on shelves someday! Finishing books takes commitment, so be proud of yourself! I haven't finished anything since Extreme...I think that's what put me in like years writer's block ): I don't remember as much with your story Humane either, so don't worry, I'll be nice lol 50k is a MASSIVE writing success! I'm so excited for you too!! Aw, I'm sorry to hear that ): I hope things do get better with your exams, and your father too. Just be hopeful, ok? I'm always here to talk if you get too stressed And how am I? Uh, well, feeling in between right now? Definitely feeling some financial pressures of not working right now and struggling writing after so long. I'm literally just been focusing on writing fanfiction, causes at least that's easier. But I'm doing much better overall :) My sister's doing alright now! Don't worry, I envy her artistic skills too. I'm only great at photo editing, which is at least very useful for making covers lol
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UnravelAsha
@sevendarkends That's okay because *drumroll* YOU ARE HERE NOW!!!! Tank you for being so supportive hehe. I'd love to connect on discord and show you my cover as well as share my doc if you're open to beta reading :))) it's at 8 chapters rn, 16k I think? I've been busy but hopefully I can speed up my editing process soon. Lol it's okay, same here. But that ONC is the most excellent thing I've ever done. I never even imagined finishing the book, much less get into the shortlist. This book... after um 3 years? Is the next book I ever finished. SO LOL. I used to beat myself a LOT because I felt like I was a horrible writer since I could never do that well ever again. Then I had a particularly hard friendship breakup, a horrible nightmare, and it got me working again. And I'd like to say my current story is leaps and bounds ahead~ Eeesshhh I don't really remember what's in Humane, if you reread it, don't judge me too harshly T-T AFTER GETTING THE TASTE OF 50K WORDS (HIGHEST EVER I'VE EVER WRITTEN AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA) 16k feels like NOTHING LMAO I AM SO EXCITED EEEKKEKEKEKEKE *high fives back!!* It's okay~ I get mails whenever you reply, so as long as I'm not dead, you'll get replies lmao Glad you got your phone back! I've actually NOT BEEN WELL AND BEEN KINDA DEPRESSED RECENTLY CAUSE OF MY EXAM GOING POORLY AND THEN AN UNRELATED FIGHT W MY FATHER BECAUSE OF INTERNSHIP EXPECTATIONS AND STUFF but it's okay, I am okay today How've you been? I remember both of you, though admittedly in bits and pieces. Sorry to hear abt a lot of hospital visits :( Hope she's okay. But that's awesome!!! I love (and envy) artists, cause canva taught me I am useless in converting my mind's image into anything visual lol.
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