Rimy2713
Hi! I'm really enjoying your story so far. I had a small suggestion, but of course it's completely your decision as the author.
I feel like the story has so much potential that it might be nice if it didn't end in the next five chapters. Maybe extending it to around ten more chapters could give the plot and the characters more time to develop.
I'd also love to see more encounters between Jungkook and Ashley. Their interactions are one of my favorite parts of the story, and I think it would be really interesting if Jungkook slowly started remembering fragments of his lost memories whenever he met or spent time with Ashley. Watching him gradually recover his memories because of his connection with her could make the story even more emotional and exciting.
This is just a suggestion from a reader who loves your work! Thank you for writing such an amazing story, and I'm excited to see what happens next.
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@sexymikkie thanks a loooot for the follow !!! Really grateful for it !! Love youuu !! And waiting for the next partttt !!
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