They're actually really good some could use less explaining and use words that are easier to understand and shorter but other than that they're pretty good stories even if some have a few spelling mistakes but other than that they got good plot lines so as far as I seen from your stories, they are pretty good from what I've been reading and I will continue to read I just don't reply that much because the last time I did somebody tried to get me to write their own story I don't know who that person was but whoever they were kept trying to get me to come up with a storyline and theme and basically write that for them and I kept telling him I wasn't going to do that but the dude kept on so I don't reply that much anymore to anyone's stories other than I either give them a vote of with me saying that I like their story just without actually saying anything just voting for it if I don't like it I don't vote but you've been writing some actual good stories I call it as I see it that some people would say if I like a story I will vote if I don't like it I won't vote, but I do like yours because they're good to read even if they're fanfiction.
