Avery

Hi Avery I was Just Wondering When your Gonna Do Chapter Ten Of "Game On" Seriously Love The Arianna Character And Her Snarky Retorts. Pls Update! Thx! ^-^

Hi Avery! Thanks for becoming a fan. Nice to connect with you. I'm looking forward to reading your works.

@1mccrawford Alright, thanks! :)

Just wanted to let you know that I should be getting to your critique soon. It'll either be tomorrow or Monday. 

Thank you for the comment! :D 
          Yes, Kairi was definitely meant to come off as very snobbish. I'm trying to give my characters flaws so they can show significant growth and character development throughout the story, so I was struggling with how flawed I should make them. So did you think it was so overpowering that it turned you off to wanting to read on?
          
          haha, does Cle come across as more violent here? I thought it was worse in TGL. He attacked Kai on several occasions. :p Here, he uses words to fight his battles a lot more. 

Thanks for the comment! Yeah, I'm aware she's too calm. I'm going to be working on that when I do revisions. *sigh* so much to fix in that story. 

@cumignisinanimam Oh really! That IS so cool! I feel special now... lol. I think I'm going to go read it now, since it has the same name as me....:P

Oh my goodness!! I have an ongoing story called Shadow Hunters!! This is so cool!

Why thankies. As long as I get peeps laughing, I'm a happy camper. XD 

Thank you for the comment! I've been planning out the new story all day with a bunch of people, and it's really shaping into something. I'm quite excited for this. :)