shadowhunter809

So I've edited the prologue, no major changes though. Just introduced 'The Farm'. Also, I added a new chapter after the prologue and labelled it as Chapter 1. .Chapter 2( which is basically the old chapter 1) is still under the editing process. 
          	I apologise for all the inconvience.

Uliscor

Me again just finished your book so here goes nothing. It was an overall good book had adventure the potential for really complicated romance problems and a good cliffhanger. Now the not so good the two bonuses Friends? Friends parts 1-2 talk about their time on the farm after the escape it would do better to have put them in the begging since it's how the two become friends, but were it is now it stops the flow of your story. Other than that everything was pretty good.

Uliscor

Hey it's me im starting beyond the fence, it shouldn't take to long but after im finished I'll tell you what i thought of it so see you in a few weeks, or a month maximum. Till then keep writing and sharing.