shadowmooxnx

Happy birthday to me :)

BIOREADS

I was initially drawn to ur book via readin a summary of the storyline.However  i was a bit dissapointed in the book.  U jumped scenes so many times,it made the story disjointed. It became incomprehensible.  Though writing a prose of any form is not easy,i feel that you should do some re editing as ur storyline is quitee good.    Wishing u all the best in ur next book