shaima400

Thank you I really appreciate it. It's my first story so I wouldn't be surprised if I have a lot of  grammar issues. So I make my friends check them for me. And I watch a lot of anime I think that's why it sounds so familiar but I made the story up. But really I appreciate it and I would try to improve my grammar. Hope you continue reading it and if you have any ideas feel free to tell me. THANKS.

drpando

You're welcome.
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shaima400

Thank you I really appreciate it. It's my first story so I wouldn't be surprised if I have a lot of  grammar issues. So I make my friends check them for me. And I watch a lot of anime I think that's why it sounds so familiar but I made the story up. But really I appreciate it and I would try to improve my grammar. Hope you continue reading it and if you have any ideas feel free to tell me. THANKS.

drpando

You're welcome.
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drpando

Well you got a new reader, and follower. I like your story and I think it's good. Some grammar issues, but that's neither here nor there. Your book reminds me of an anime oddly, unless that was what you were aiming for. In any case, great job with your story and characters. I'll be sure to read when you add more chapters.

shaima400

Guys I hope you read my book it's really nice. I would be happy if you did. Even though you don't like anime this book it's really nice. If you like it please star it and massage me on what should I do good at and what I am good at this would make me so happy and excited to do more chapters. Thank you.