shambhavi Singh

Healing hearts wale mein as Varsha & family are alive so kyu na woh Sara ko target kare as Bihaan is still alive & usko toh badla lena hai infact unn sabko badla lena hai & Shubman was saying na they have to pay for every tear Sara shed so why not show it that way ki they try to harm Sara! Bihaan ka motive bhi toh pura nahi hua tha & Shubman is still alive so.... 

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          Heyyyy
          This is my first book on Wattpad and it is a Shubman Gill Fanfiction
          I'm sure you'll love it so give it a chance and let me know your feedback too
          Will mean a lot to me <3
          Lots of love

Hey everyone I updated all my stories so please guys shower some love please please please....
          
          And Six months of love is not showing in my draft section guys [ cry emo ] I don't know how it's deleted.
          
          Feel free to share your thoughts in any story plot.
          
          Thankyou 
          
          Take care ♥♥

Hi  when are you going to update 
          All good 

Pls update triangular tale

Hey!!
          here is my new book Tadapll18+
          Pls give it a try and I hope u will like it!
          Sorry for posting here♥
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Hey everyone, how are you?
          Hope everyone is fine......
          I ll update on 10 Feb double or triple ohhk but now it's not possible bcz my exams are on 1st February so......
          
          Keep loving our Shubsara ⁠❤

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Came again to give my opinion (time hi nahi mil raha) bro in your last ff u showed them confessing & then they became 1 that night... That was special I mean the way u made her give him surprise then bath tub together everything was hot, beautiful & properly executed!! Here some things are lacking... The confession happened ok but then without giving any proper surprise specially when the date was also ruined u added that thing at the end u know what I mean I mean God I can't even properly express what I want to say ⁰__⁰ it looked very simple I mean not the way u write it!! Nothing like coming closer, intimacy then finally...!! It looked like their story was rushed forward yeah itna bhi slow nahi hona chahiye but it was too rushed the reason I commented "So gaye dono don't disturb" "isse ek step aage jaane ke liye kuch tagda hona chahiye" then I even mentioned "Abhi dono hug karke so gaye" bcoz according to me tagda twist will be when their bua will come... Then we have their wedding functions where thoda romance u can show & wedding night!! So abhi woh add karna I feel was a rush specially when that wasn't properly executed please don't mind (cry emo*) Now I got another idea typing this woh agle msg pe likhti hu....

Just wanted to suggest... When u are getting Virat & Anushka too married again with Mahi & Sakshi, then why not Shubman & Sara too again? I mean their marriage wasn't their choice... He almost lost his life so why not get them remarried properly with all the rituals (pehle bhi all three brothers got married with all the rituals but phirse karwa do) bcoz this time they are in love & the most important thing is past 16 months he was in coma & Sara died every single day cursing herself thinking she was the reason behind all this... U are getting my point right? Also I have 1 more idea to add too only if u want