@shambhaviSingh159
Hey everyone, how are you?
Hope everyone is fine......
I ll update on 10 Feb double or triple ohhk but now it's not possible bcz my exams are on 1st February so......
Keep loving our Shubsara ❤
Came again to give my opinion (time hi nahi mil raha) bro in your last ff u showed them confessing & then they became 1 that night... That was special I mean the way u made her give him surprise then bath tub together everything was hot, beautiful & properly executed!! Here some things are lacking... The confession happened ok but then without giving any proper surprise specially when the date was also ruined u added that thing at the end u know what I mean I mean God I can't even properly express what I want to say ⁰__⁰ it looked very simple I mean not the way u write it!! Nothing like coming closer, intimacy then finally...!! It looked like their story was rushed forward yeah itna bhi slow nahi hona chahiye but it was too rushed the reason I commented "So gaye dono don't disturb" "isse ek step aage jaane ke liye kuch tagda hona chahiye" then I even mentioned "Abhi dono hug karke so gaye" bcoz according to me tagda twist will be when their bua will come... Then we have their wedding functions where thoda romance u can show & wedding night!! So abhi woh add karna I feel was a rush specially when that wasn't properly executed please don't mind (cry emo*) Now I got another idea typing this woh agle msg pe likhti hu....
@Kokisfan22 firstly thank you so much bro for praising me and mentioning The Way I wrote •ᴗ•❤ Thankyou so much yrr and now coming to the story so I will not disappoint you I definitely add what you want, and new entry is not about baby its BUAA ˘ ³˘ or yrr story you are literally very amazing yrrr I think you should really join the ekta kapoor office hehe . Friends??
Just wanted to suggest... When u are getting Virat & Anushka too married again with Mahi & Sakshi, then why not Shubman & Sara too again? I mean their marriage wasn't their choice... He almost lost his life so why not get them remarried properly with all the rituals (pehle bhi all three brothers got married with all the rituals but phirse karwa do) bcoz this time they are in love & the most important thing is past 16 months he was in coma & Sara died every single day cursing herself thinking she was the reason behind all this... U are getting my point right? Also I have 1 more idea to add too only if u want
@Kokisfan22 thankyou so much bro I ll definitely add the buaa segment and yeah aap bilkul likh skti hai tv shows hehe hnn hnn thk gyi hogi aaram kar lijiye ✿
@Kokisfan22 Arey it's fine ab suggestion bolti hu... So your last story had their bua Lavanya right jo koi tamasha karne wali thi par woh toh Epilogue dal diya tumne so what if u make their bua's entry here? And when she comes to know what happened with Shubman, she will curse Sara (akele mein usko khari khoti sunayegi, Sara will reply back too but she won't say anything to anyone) & show that she knows that Sara loved Bihaan in the past so she points her finger on Sara's character and and and... Shaadi ke functions mein hi uski entry hogi toh sabse best hai, baat baat pe Sara ko taunts, & then ya phir shaadi ke din ya kisi dusre pre wedding ya post wedding ritual mein she will speak bad about Sara's character infront of everyone & uspe hi ilzaam dalegi ki uski wajah se Shubman ke saath sab hua... Arey bhai ITV shows mein buas kaisi hoti hai ghar todne types bilkul waise hi dikhana... Tab Sara won't be able to take it anymore... Woh waise bhi abhi bhi khudko hi dosh deti hai na isiliye yeh sab uske dimaag mein baith jayega & she will have an emotional outburst in front of everyone & she will run to her room & try to do something locking the door (by god bilkul Ekta Kapoor ke show ki feel aa rahi hai... I should write tv shows hehe) & then Shubman darwaza todega but after the damage is done, still they will save her!! Phir toh jo hota hai shows mein wohi karna & it will be better agar yeh wala scene post wedding ritual mein ho, pehli rasoi day, pehli rasoi ke time pe bhi bua will not praise her & put her down jabki uska khana sabko pasand aayega!! Hufff thak gayi type karte karte
Hiii
Hey guys,
There is too much pressure of studies , I am exhausted I really need a break but I will be back guys with amazing story I promise ohhk and I miss you everyone ˘⌣˘
Hey!!
This is my new ff
https://www.wattpad.com/story/376344201?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=iamswatisng
I hope you like it!!
It's on Ruturaj Gaikwad and Utkarsha Pawar.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/373691961?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=MimFarzana18 Please comment "SHUBSARA"
Heyy when are you posting next part of a triangular tale? Today? Next part
Hyy bro
Are you posting triangular tale 11th and 12th part or not because I can't see
@shambhaviSingh159 can you please republished them because I'm literally unable to read