shamiecuz

Ysa Rivas :-)

Inoue_Mizuki

thanks po sa pagbasa ng poem ko :)
          i read the description of your work "the last cry"
          uhmmmm sa first sentence po napansin ko you used "your" dapat po "you're"
          and sa third sentence po "how can you fake a laugh and smile even if your heart is suffering?" medyo inedit ko lang :) i hope you don't mind.
          
          good luck ;)

Inoue_Mizuki

@shamiecuz thanks po :D
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shamiecuz

@Inoue_Mizuki I just read this actually I wrote it medjo matagal na. Well salamat s:) I appreciate it naman :)
            Actually, sa phone ko lang yung sinulat kaya dami typos ganun hehehe welcome rin pala. Galing mo magsulat :)
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