Just stopping by your profile to thank you for voting for Mermaids and the Vampires Who Love Them. So happy you are enjoying Waverly’s tale so far! Hope you like the rest! Britt
Hi.. I checked your book out and uh it's okay, not bad. You have the concept planned out which I like. You can fix it by elaborating on the story a bit more and get an editor. Space out the paragraphs too. I just thought I could help :)