sharlpastry81

I GOT F1 TICKETS FOR THE AUS GP!!
          	I’m so excited and it’s going to be the first race of the season

oscarpastry-

@sharlpastry81 congrats!! hope you have fun <3
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boyle_biri_yok

Hey, sorry for disturbing but I’m starting a new story about F1, and I want it to reach to the right community, I wrote this before in my mother tongue but now I’m translating into English. Can you take a look at it? Thank you already!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1471311142?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=boyle_biri_yok

boyle_biri_yok

@sharlpastry81 thank youu <3
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sharlpastry81

Sorry for the late response but I just saw your message and I gave your first chapter a read and it’s so good I think it’s really interesting and I already want to read more. I would probably say just to make sure that the writing flows well which can be hard when English isn’t your first language but you’re really doing an amazing job and I already love this book. xx hannah
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