sharma_97

 I have posted the new chapter have a look!

myexmynextlife

Thanks for the follow! I already checked your story. It looks good and I'm interested in it. I'll continue, I also wanna add to my read list this story. If you are interested in fanfiction or poems maybe or just stories then check mine. :) I would be happy to hear from you.

myexmynextlife

Oh it's fine for me. Take your time and I hope you are feeling better now. Wish you the best. Thank you for your the votes. You are so kind.
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sharma_97

@myexmynextlife why not i m checking yours now actually from past 2 3 days i was ill and from last night i was not able to login  that's why I m late here
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bangtanrewinds

Thank you for the follow <3

bangtanrewinds

@Hehehehe_01091997 sure, I'll check it out when I can ^^
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sharma_97

@bangtanrewinds  mention not... Hey whenever you are free just check my story if it's fine or not i not confident enough as it's my first story ☺️
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sharma_97

Hello everyone tell me about the first story of mine "betrayal took the heart"
          It's not completed yet but I will try to complete it by November ...

myexmynextlife

@Hehehehe_01091997 First I liked the introduction of the story and the characters the most, and that's exactly why I decided to give the story a chance. Then, as I continued reading, the appearance of Jungkook's stepbrother, Joon Ki, further encouraged me to closely follow the development of the story.  Perhaps if you're up for a good advice, I would suggest that you should add more detailed descriptions into the story if it's possible, because with them you could capture the readers' attention much better. And one more thing, you can try to show your work to another Wattpad users too, and also try to comment and be supportive a little bit more but not as an over giver. I think with time you will earn more recognition don't be so hard on yourself. Not the views matter. But the quality of your work. :) Wishing you the best!
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