shaybangtanie

Hello loves, 
          	
          	How are you all doing? 
          	I wanna stop by to really apologies on my delay in updating SERAPH 2. I know many of you are waiting for the story and some even gave up on me. :,( 
          	
          	The reason why I’ve been so delayed is because I just started my Masters study and it’s taking all my time as I’m also working full time. It’s a crazy schedule. I barely have time to sit down and be creative. 
          	
          	I will keep trying to find time to finish SERAPH without a doing a half ass job, just bear with me a little. 
          	
          	Love!

purpleblooded_7

@shaybangtanie it's alright author...take care ❤️
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lovinglyTaeKook

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Hey,
          Ever been cheated on? Or were you the one to cheat on others and that's why you normalised cheating in Saudade?? Must say, I was following you, and just read one story and regret your mindset. Shut hole of story and shithole or plot. If you are giving cheater a chance than atleast make them suffer. Make some nice comeback.
          You cud have easily made this story a taekook ending and much better way..
          Tae suffers - Kook dates Lucas - things done work out for Lucas has to leave for something important that he can't pass on (you can make up anything after all you justified cheating) - tae and look are friends - tae keeps feeling guilty - apologizes multipl times with sincerity - when kook is heart broken due to Lucas' departure, tae is there for him as his best friend - tae helps him heal - they reconnect - taes change of behaviour and assurance of no more fucking someone else in drunk state - taes efforts to win kook over - happy ending...
          But you chose to normalise cheating..
          Shame on you...

nermosthoughts

Hi guys!!
          
          Can you check out my new first FF and support me through it??
          
          
          Don't forget to vote and comment.. I appreciate you all !!! 
          
          Hope you like it!!
          
          
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kooksepvdec

Well I seriously couldn't keep myself from commenting on "Saudade" where, author, you have seriously glorified and romanticized cheating and portraying the sinner as the victim! The disappointment I felt after reading the ff and how much I regretted it but kept reading on until the end thinking atleast you will end jk with a better man and provide justice to him and let the cheater succumb to his own karma! Not just that,the fact that you didn't even put warning ( disclaimer) at the beginning of the story stating that there is "cheating" involved and you have romanticized cheating and ended the bottom male lead with a cheater, lier and manipulator by guilt tripping everyone including him and victimizing the real cheater!! The disappointment!!

shaybangtanie

@kooksepvdec dear reader, Im sorry to hear it was such a terrible experience for you and I can sense how disappointed you are with the storyline and lack of trigger warning. When I wrote that book, I was very much immature with my writing and just wanted to freely express my thoughts from the life I was living that period of time. I was in a position of a victim back then and this book is a thought of what I was going through. I have taken your consideration and put a trigger warning in my description hoping it won't make others feel the same like you did. 
            
            I truly appreciate your very honest feedback and apologies in not giving you a good remark on that book. I have since stopped writing for a long time on such contents. If you notice anything else I can improve, do let me know. 
            
            Thank you, 
            Shay.
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kooksepvdec

@Purplee0107 well if you aren't ok with the top cheating on bottom and still they end up together without the top suffering even an ounce of what the bottom went through, then it's better you don't read it
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Purplee0107

@kooksepvdec I was about to read that book but now I'm having second thoughts about it.....should I go for it?
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